On editing:
- Good special effects.
- Nice shot variation.
- Could add more blurred effects to other parts of the video.
- Texting scene is too slow.
- Should speed up the editing on the rave scene.
- We should re-think the transition between normal and fish eye lens shots.
- Speed up the kitchen scenes or transition the shots straight to the rave.
On target audience appeal:
- Some of the rave scenes are slightly empty and this makes it look unrealistic.
- The linear narrative is well done, it flows well.
- The class could relate to the situation and narrative of the video, as they are the same age as our target audience.
- Could appeal to a younger target audience, between ages 15-17 as it portrays a youth rebellion lifestyle.
On improvements we could make:
- Put in more lip syncing scenes.
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