Tuesday, 1 March 2011

Audience Feedback

Our roughcut of our music video was presented to the other media class, they gave us this feedback:

On editing:
  • Good special effects.
  • Nice shot variation.
  • Could add more blurred effects to other parts of the video.
  • Texting scene is too slow.
  • Should speed up the editing on the rave scene.
  • We should re-think the transition between normal and fish eye lens shots.
  • Speed up the kitchen scenes or transition the shots straight to the rave.
On target audience appeal:
  • Some of the rave scenes are slightly empty and this makes it look unrealistic.
  • The linear narrative is well done, it flows well.
  • The class could relate to the situation and narrative of the video, as they are the same age as our target audience.
  • Could appeal to a younger target audience, between ages 15-17 as it portrays a youth rebellion lifestyle.
On improvements we could make:
  • Put in more lip syncing scenes.

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