Audience Feedback

Our roughcut of our music video was presented to the other media class, they gave us this feedback:

On editing:

• Good special effects.
• Nice shot variation.
• Could add more blurred effects to other parts of the video.
• Texting scene is too slow.
• Should speed up the editing on the rave scene.
• We should re-think the transition between normal and fish eye lens shots.
• Speed up the kitchen scenes or transition the shots straight to the rave.

On target audience appeal:

• Some of the rave scenes are slightly empty and this makes it look unrealistic.
• The linear narrative is well done, it flows well.
• The class could relate to the situation and narrative of the video, as they are the same age as our target audience.
• Could appeal to a younger target audience, between ages 15-17 as it portrays a youth rebellion lifestyle.

On improvements we could make:

• Put in more lip syncing scenes.